Showing posts with label Vogler. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Vogler. Show all posts

Tuesday, August 30, 2011

Hurricanes and Writing in the Dark



                So Irene blew through the Northeast this past weekend leaving destruction in varying degrees in her wake.  We were fortunate and suffered very little property damage.  My thoughts and prayers go out to those less fortunate.  We did lose power for approximately thirty-six hours but we were prepared with a generator to hook up the refrigerator, one television to entertain others and an oxygen concentrator for my father.  My father normally lives on his own in a 55-and-up community about two miles from our house.  He has emphysema (50 years of smoking will do that to you) and requires oxygen supplementation. Prior to Irene’s arrival, we picked him up and brought him to our house in anticipation of the power outage. His development is still without power.

                On top of that, my daughter is preparing to move to the New York apartment that was the result of the hunt covered in a previous blog. There are boxes, furniture and goddess only knows what piled everywhere.

                Did I mention my father is hard of hearing and likes to turn up the volume so that the neighbors can listen along?

                Don’t get me wrong, I love my family and am grateful for the minimal impact Irene has had on us. But hurricanes, fathers and moving daughters can throw a routine into chaos.

                On the full night of the black-out, I sought out the solitude of my writing cave in the spare room we have on the second floor.  It was dark and there was no electricity so I lit three candles and surrounded my paper with them. For someone who writes about vampires and ancient Druids, it was the perfect ambience for working on the sequel to Dark Dealings.  The soft flicker of the candle flame was soothing and chased the stress into the shadows.

                The pieces are starting to fall into place for Book 2 (as yet untitled) and I have Christopher Vogler’s: The Writer’s Journey, Mythic Structure for Writers to thank. It is one of my touchstone works when I feel like my story arc is floundering. In his work, Vogler takes the Hero’s Journey, as well-described and analyzed by Joseph Campbell, and applies it to modern storytelling first in movies and then in the written word. It is not a formula approach to novel writing but a study of the common elements found in great and memorable stories since we first sat around the cave fire. It helps me focus on why my plot may feel dull and listless.
               
                Like my ancestors the bards of Ireland, I spent the night in a darkness broken only by the flickering tongues of flame. I thought about how to make my story better. I want a novel that will transport someone from their normal world, to take them on an adventure and give them a gift to bring back with them. And so I struggle and study and learn from other storytellers, from readers and from the flame.

                Come back this weekend to meet one of those storytellers, Steve Umstead, a fellow PubWriteGroup member. We learn from each other every day on our journey to be the best writers we can be.
                So the storm moves on and so do I until the next hurricane, earthquake or, dare I hope, flash of inspiration.  It is only the beginning of the season you know.


Wednesday, January 26, 2011

A Day in the Life of a Hero

“1.        THE ORDINARY WORLD.  The hero, uneasy, uncomfortable or unaware, is introduced sympathetically so the audience can identify with the situation or dilemma.  The hero is shown against a background of environment, heredity, and personal history.  Some kind of polarity in the hero’s life is pulling in different directions and causing stress.” C. Vogler, The Writer’s Journey
On the website, http://www.thewritersjourney.com/hero's_journey.htm , Christopher Vogler does a terrific job of explaining the Hero’s Journey, as originally described by Joseph Campbell.  It breaks down into 12 phases.  The first phase is the Ordinary World, which he describes above.  I highly recommend you add this site to your favorites.  There is also a highly useful book and a DVD.  It helped me view my story structure in a whole new light.

Please understand the Hero’s Journey  is not a formula.  It is a reflection and description of the common traits that memorable stories have had since the beginning of time.  The key traits can be found in such extremes as The Tales of Hercules and Shrek.  Good storytellers have a deep rooted sense of the journey.  Where does it come from?  I believe it comes from read and lots of it.  Good books, bad books (bet you can pick the spots that don’t work) and everything in between.  In a good series, it is found not only in an individual novel but in the meta-arc.  Pick one of your favorite novels (or movies) see if the pieces are there.

So how do you start your novel?  Blow up a building on page one and risk that no cares that your intended hero (non-gender specific) is the only one who gets out alive.  Give too much backstory and you don’t hook the reader.  The craft and art or writing is finding just the right balance.  Something that tells us about your hero and engages and perhaps foreshadows what is to come.  This may feed into the debate over prologue.

That’s why I am on the umpteenth revision of my opening, sometimes for the better and sometimes it’s “what was I thinking!”

How about you?  Tell us how your opening fits into the Ordinary World.

How does this fit with your own journey as a writer?

Sunday, January 23, 2011

The Guardian Writer: SAVE THE CAT CONTEST!!!

Fellow writer Melissa Dean has a great blog and is running this contest. I am a huge believer in Joseph Campbell's Hero with a Thousand Faces and the subsequent application to screenwriting and writing. Vogler's Writer's Journey was a big A-HA for me. So SAVE THE CAT and save your novel. Read and follow Melissa.

More on Hero's Journey later.

The Guardian Writer: SAVE THE CAT CONTEST!!!: "As writers, I believe whenever we find a useful tool, we should pay it forward to other writers. I have found such a tool in the SAVE..."